Hi Kieran, Its me Christopher from St Pius X Catholic school. I am a year 7 student. I really love your poem espicially what you described like: the sky the sea and your uniform. But next time check your writing the sky is black at night time. But besides that you did a wonderful job!
My name is Sateki from St Pius X Catholic school. I really like the way you express things that are the same color as blue. My favorite line is "eyes are as blue as a blue Ford Mustang" I can't wait to see more of your learning shared with us.
Hi Kieran,
ReplyDeleteIts me Christopher from St Pius X Catholic school. I am a year 7 student.
I really love your poem espicially what you described like: the sky the sea and your uniform. But next time check your writing the sky is black at night time. But besides that you did a wonderful job!
Hi Kieran,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sateki from St Pius X Catholic school. I really like the way you express things that are the same color as blue. My favorite line is
"eyes are as blue as a blue Ford Mustang" I can't wait to see more of your learning shared with us.
Keep up the good work!!!
Hi Kieran ,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you describe different objects ,
It is very descriptive.
Good work